tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post2751422524014540730..comments2023-10-10T07:18:30.391-04:00Comments on Away We Go: Fiction: A Step ForwardNancy Chttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04313721217543578257noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-33371372840067356062011-02-21T01:28:31.083-05:002011-02-21T01:28:31.083-05:00Wow! Loved this! I was hooked from the beginning...Wow! Loved this! I was hooked from the beginning. I want to know more! What happens next??THE SARCASM GODDESShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16701902616479991303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-81422138864030049872011-02-20T15:58:21.624-05:002011-02-20T15:58:21.624-05:00This was FAN-friggin-Tastic. Titillating, in fact....This was FAN-friggin-Tastic. Titillating, in fact. I totally felt her connection, her wanting, her emotion and wow, it was such powerful writing. The disclaimer made me laugh for the first time in the piece because the rest of it was so powerful and full of emotion, I couldn't even picture the feathered bodysuit until much later, as I read the last lines, and other people's comments. ;) <br /><br />Well done.Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972798018825603047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-29698552366434693032011-02-20T00:59:41.090-05:002011-02-20T00:59:41.090-05:00I loved the drunk shopping, I've never done it...I loved the drunk shopping, I've never done it. And I don't think I have heard of it happening, apart from creepy drunk men looking for more beer. I live in a small box sometimes. But now, I'm going to keep my eye out for drunk shoppers.Amber @ The Mom Roadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16544142227175083170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-68393921323901110412011-02-19T08:44:26.779-05:002011-02-19T08:44:26.779-05:00Loved reading this Nancy! I'm not a big fan of...Loved reading this Nancy! I'm not a big fan of lingerie but I am a big fan of cold,cold beer. And I am a big fan of your writing!Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01564542013071462911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-25806323948973647552011-02-19T00:55:07.764-05:002011-02-19T00:55:07.764-05:00LMAO BIG BIRD???? This definitely took me totally...LMAO BIG BIRD???? This definitely took me totally away from the stresses of this week and cracked me right up, because I did something similar....but I was sober...SSSHHHHH Don't tell!Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10395153992892479101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-45228429706104893082011-02-18T21:44:11.592-05:002011-02-18T21:44:11.592-05:00Oh lord, I was getting so nervous for these two. I...Oh lord, I was getting so nervous for these two. I couldn't tell if I wanted them to take the plunge, if she should be getting married. Drunk shopping, so dangerous, I did it once, with my boyfriends sister in Target, you can imagine how that went.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-34927261215481601582011-02-18T21:15:40.125-05:002011-02-18T21:15:40.125-05:00A feathered body suit- never seen that before. Cou...A feathered body suit- never seen that before. Could be interesting.Jack Steinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625864271071630940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-59159267465112712682011-02-18T21:01:53.267-05:002011-02-18T21:01:53.267-05:00Kept me reading. Great depiction of two drunk fri...Kept me reading. Great depiction of two drunk friends! Perhaps drinking Pinot?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00067535681616087770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-63710925443391716252011-02-18T18:22:54.722-05:002011-02-18T18:22:54.722-05:00Great job creating tension! I was waiting for more...Great job creating tension! I was waiting for more, stupid word count. :)Jessica Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331090466541120750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-36889840172064193982011-02-18T18:00:07.455-05:002011-02-18T18:00:07.455-05:00Wow, I love this!
The sensuality.
The potential....Wow, I love this! <br />The sensuality. <br />The potential.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-78657571508603919512011-02-18T17:51:07.008-05:002011-02-18T17:51:07.008-05:00HOT! Loved the tension. I was wondering the whole ...HOT! Loved the tension. I was wondering the whole time what was going to happen.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-946842140148673902011-02-18T16:09:48.902-05:002011-02-18T16:09:48.902-05:00SHEXY!
God, I love it. And I loved the gossamer t...SHEXY!<br /><br />God, I love it. And I loved the gossamer thread of sexual tension.<br /><br />Awesome.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-18470634679259734222011-02-18T15:23:40.110-05:002011-02-18T15:23:40.110-05:00This could've only been improved with pictures...This could've only been improved with pictures of your lingerie. *eye wiggle*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-37413611529016293682011-02-18T14:39:30.944-05:002011-02-18T14:39:30.944-05:00I am SO using SHEXY in my vocabulary now! Of cour...I am SO using SHEXY in my vocabulary now! Of course it may only work on twitter with you and all of the above girls... he he. <br /><br />Good, fun read.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01044279582701415786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-13066056348513868432011-02-18T13:33:34.086-05:002011-02-18T13:33:34.086-05:00This was a fun read. It felt so real. I really e...This was a fun read. It felt so real. I really enjoyed it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-22613471636186595422011-02-18T13:04:44.969-05:002011-02-18T13:04:44.969-05:00How Shexy can Big Bird be... :) Great post!How Shexy can Big Bird be... :) Great post!amygrewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10655920157645555504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-61611487507275563402011-02-18T12:19:13.366-05:002011-02-18T12:19:13.366-05:00I really enjoyed this dialogue. It was believable ...I really enjoyed this dialogue. It was believable and funny and now I want to go drunk lingerie shopping.<br /><br />Even I don't know what a peignoir is?Tina L. Hookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12780807680745838371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-6805069991303129062011-02-18T10:17:30.173-05:002011-02-18T10:17:30.173-05:00Bow chicka bow wow.... Totally fresh and original,...Bow chicka bow wow.... Totally fresh and original, right down to Big Bird!Pamela Goldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03828671725848167955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-2040831385485870772011-02-18T10:07:06.588-05:002011-02-18T10:07:06.588-05:00Hi, here from the RDBC and wow, I'm fanning my...Hi, here from the RDBC and wow, I'm fanning myself. <br />That was wonderful, make this into a book or a short story or a movie. It's wonderful and SHEXY...I have felt some of those feelings for my girlfriends in the past, none i would act on, it was that "hot" but a feeling of friendship + ...<br />it was soooo good.Kirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17894442143508446312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-57943515056857549552011-02-18T09:15:47.960-05:002011-02-18T09:15:47.960-05:00'burning like cinnamon...' love that line...'burning like cinnamon...' love that line.<br />This felt so real - the dialogue, the exchanges, the scenes. <br />great stuff.Life As I Know Ithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492465378321819342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-76856892994383366992011-02-18T09:15:40.359-05:002011-02-18T09:15:40.359-05:00I love it! I can totally picture this crazy get-up...I love it! I can totally picture this crazy get-up! Great description!Staceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15051820416201978398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-30880365783908436182011-02-18T09:03:40.040-05:002011-02-18T09:03:40.040-05:00Nicely done, Nancy!
I especially loved these two l...Nicely done, Nancy!<br />I especially loved these two lines: <br />"The amber liquid was cool and effortless."<br />and...<br />"When I kissed him goodbye, it was like kissing a dream, right before it fades to dawn."Nicholehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17074492084387694619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-90902581252588795162011-02-18T07:19:33.440-05:002011-02-18T07:19:33.440-05:00I've never been lingerie shopping w/ girlfrien...I've never been lingerie shopping w/ girlfriends, either. Sad.<br /><br />I really loved this but couldn't comment yesterday b/c computer wasn't cooperating.<br /><br />Does it sound bad to say I have felt lingering glances before? or maybe I've done the glancing. Shit I have issues.<br /><br />Regardless, this was lovely.So real. Captivated me.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13214914707096410664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-74405579161654398862011-02-18T07:11:49.067-05:002011-02-18T07:11:49.067-05:00This was so good. You need part two, felt like I ...This was so good. You need part two, felt like I was reading a book and really looked forward to turning the page. Flawlessly done and LOVED the use of peignoir.Jessicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10825508701189254822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-87136236410757777742011-02-17T23:06:44.770-05:002011-02-17T23:06:44.770-05:00AWESOME!!! You used the word "peignoirs"...AWESOME!!! You used the word "peignoirs" in a sentence :) Bawahahaha!!!<br /><br />Loved this piece. I am a visual reader so I saw everything just the way you described it. I will forever see you as Big Bird.<br /><br />Seriously though, wonderful writing and I loved what you showed through this prompt (which was crotchless - Gah...I said I would be serious) This has a wonderful life lesson to it!So Who Is The Crayon Wrangler?https://www.blogger.com/profile/10085121764324581283noreply@blogger.com