tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post3299061511799873181..comments2023-10-10T07:18:30.391-04:00Comments on Away We Go: Red Writing Hood: Like A SongbirdNancy Chttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04313721217543578257noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-37046505836762526702011-01-14T20:41:35.956-05:002011-01-14T20:41:35.956-05:00WOW! I just wandered over here from the 1/14 Red W...WOW! I just wandered over here from the 1/14 Red Writing Hood meme story. PLEASE tell me there is a big, fat, novel in the works about this family. <br /><br />You had me hooked with the line, "His words hung in the air, then fell to the ground, like swatted flies." And then you just kept getting better.VictoriaKPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07987993161693042703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-80688254983517609642010-12-27T12:08:09.502-05:002010-12-27T12:08:09.502-05:00I'm still holding my breath, waiting to see if...I'm still holding my breath, waiting to see if he bursts into flames or something. I can see this as vividly as if it were the scene in a film. I can HEAR her.<br /><br />Well done!Adellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02514702407736792897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-66308735103921100212010-12-26T16:43:43.561-05:002010-12-26T16:43:43.561-05:00This is perfection. You get just enough detail to ...This is perfection. You get just enough detail to understand and know what you need to know. I didn't want it to end...I wanted more, and that's a sure sign of amazing writing!Nataliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02269415067329919166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-83083974456934023622010-12-26T11:46:08.519-05:002010-12-26T11:46:08.519-05:00I still love the ending of this and the connection...I still love the ending of this and the connection back to the title.Kristy @Loveandblasphemyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02634987114195614214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-54316331481632968252010-12-25T18:21:25.774-05:002010-12-25T18:21:25.774-05:00Awesomeness all over again!
Merry ChristmasAwesomeness all over again!<br /><br />Merry ChristmasCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-50931129276026875952010-12-25T15:01:46.032-05:002010-12-25T15:01:46.032-05:00I remember reading this one. Loved it then, love ...I remember reading this one. Loved it then, love it now. Still cheering for Walter.Jessica Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331090466541120750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-50663316857001003392010-12-25T13:19:08.193-05:002010-12-25T13:19:08.193-05:00I'm so sorry I missed this the first time arou...I'm so sorry I missed this the first time around. LOVE it. And might just be a forshadowing of me and my mom ;-)<br /><br />Luckily, she's not that bad.<br /><br />Hooray for Walter! (even the choice of his name is perfection Nancy)<br /><br />Merriest of Christmas my dear friend. Hope this day finds you and yours well.<br /><br />XO - AshleiAshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16041241998702255016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-51993617450308245552010-12-25T12:08:10.553-05:002010-12-25T12:08:10.553-05:00I came back for more. I really, really, REALLY enj...I came back for more. I really, really, REALLY enjoyed this story the first time around, and loved it just as much the second time reading it (or third or fourth). You know what? I'd really LOVE to know more about both of these characters, even though you showed their characters so well.<br /><br />Merry Christmas!The Drama Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11989820542966245871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-65723099267544437032010-12-25T12:04:53.417-05:002010-12-25T12:04:53.417-05:00OMG I'm loving rereading all this great work! ...OMG I'm loving rereading all this great work! Amazing writing!Cristinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15064636500827230911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-90565492785460747232010-11-07T21:29:27.510-05:002010-11-07T21:29:27.510-05:00Brilliant! Makes me want to write a letter for my ...Brilliant! Makes me want to write a letter for my funeral. No! Seven letters, one for each kid to read outloud. BwahahahahahaMarlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18000815937078399278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-57219789084576183212010-10-27T21:28:31.867-04:002010-10-27T21:28:31.867-04:00That was just...wow. Awesome. As usual ;)...wowThat was just...wow. Awesome. As usual ;)...wowAn Imperfect Mommahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11032171890421217790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-38868354798797732922010-10-26T15:04:34.816-04:002010-10-26T15:04:34.816-04:00Well done. My favorite is your descriptive languag...Well done. My favorite is your descriptive language. It sucks you right in.Tina L. Hookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12780807680745838371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-20307340733054470782010-10-26T12:42:18.996-04:002010-10-26T12:42:18.996-04:00Great writing, but this is most certainly not &quo...Great writing, but this is most certainly not "your" 80th birthday party.Claudya Martinezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17034216831504207496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-7730391661004267382010-10-25T20:58:56.760-04:002010-10-25T20:58:56.760-04:00You had me the whole time. Great work!!You had me the whole time. Great work!!Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01564542013071462911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-82896018499491060202010-10-24T23:14:02.460-04:002010-10-24T23:14:02.460-04:00Is it me, or did that read like a great opening sc...Is it me, or did that read like a great opening scene to a blockbuster movie?<br /><br />Hats off to you Nancy. Great job.Joanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-50408536995847068232010-10-24T09:27:22.623-04:002010-10-24T09:27:22.623-04:00This was a wonderful piece. I love the humor and ...This was a wonderful piece. I love the humor and the thoughtfulness in it.Debbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17480046958714954128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-19773343536174125262010-10-23T21:26:55.788-04:002010-10-23T21:26:55.788-04:00Definitely flexing some writing muscles here. Real...Definitely flexing some writing muscles here. Really great.cheatymoonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06328903955238115971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-63026713628545659622010-10-23T20:58:15.073-04:002010-10-23T20:58:15.073-04:00Wow, I am SO out of my league.
This was amazing. ...Wow, I am SO out of my league.<br /><br />This was amazing. I just loved the continuity of the piece. The Audubon Society AND his departure so birdlike.<br /><br />Flat out WOW.The mad woman behind the bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15329865928939993983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-64687239641587371612010-10-23T15:09:08.911-04:002010-10-23T15:09:08.911-04:00Wow, how interesting! Very different. I liked it...Wow, how interesting! Very different. I liked it very much.Kristy @Loveandblasphemyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02634987114195614214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-62628110061208907732010-10-23T09:53:39.504-04:002010-10-23T09:53:39.504-04:00I felt like I just opened a page from the middle o...I felt like I just opened a page from the middle of the book and was engrossed in the story right from the start. I like Walter - you could feel his emotions so easily. Great piece.Mommy Wishdomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07840619627314731020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-58118615980188069582010-10-23T01:22:11.099-04:002010-10-23T01:22:11.099-04:00Love it! I only hope Walter wasn't counting o...Love it! I only hope Walter wasn't counting on his inheritance. I have a feeling his mom might have predicted that one. :)Jessica Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331090466541120750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-8380334298777402022010-10-22T23:32:30.333-04:002010-10-22T23:32:30.333-04:00Wonderful story telling. I absolutely loved how sh...Wonderful story telling. I absolutely loved how she seemed to know exactly what her son was thinking as she wrote it. If only she knew how he would fly the coop at the end. I LOVE it.The Drama Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11989820542966245871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-15095264418493273292010-10-22T22:37:17.247-04:002010-10-22T22:37:17.247-04:00I love being fooled. Well written, great build up...I love being fooled. Well written, great build up, a camoflauge of feelings and then a well executed twist. <br /><br />Thoroughly enjoyable. Many thanks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-327005631454549942010-10-22T21:29:14.661-04:002010-10-22T21:29:14.661-04:00Oh what a great piece!Oh what a great piece!Laura Marchanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07878325934353943862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-47859926580208791042010-10-22T20:38:27.935-04:002010-10-22T20:38:27.935-04:00Nancy I really liked this. Clever story line and g...Nancy I really liked this. Clever story line and great delivery, Angela's character comes through very loud and clear.One Photohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05793386254564806126noreply@blogger.com