tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post41435739669793910..comments2023-10-10T07:18:30.391-04:00Comments on Away We Go: Red Writing Hood: Ad patresNancy Chttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04313721217543578257noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-70573344326032815832010-10-15T01:34:28.014-04:002010-10-15T01:34:28.014-04:00This is amazing. I love how you weave it all toget...This is amazing. I love how you weave it all together.Marlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18000815937078399278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-5189453744316108212010-09-26T15:53:28.929-04:002010-09-26T15:53:28.929-04:00You blow me away every time. And I know I say that...You blow me away every time. And I know I say that every time, but it's the honest truth. Your talent is overflowing...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13214914707096410664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-91253771303307443702010-09-26T08:05:51.541-04:002010-09-26T08:05:51.541-04:00Nancy- what a beautiful tribute to your family.Nancy- what a beautiful tribute to your family.Bekahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06626966615920269238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-3487511774465379372010-09-26T00:14:15.191-04:002010-09-26T00:14:15.191-04:00Your poem is a beautiful, soft dream.
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TraciYour poem is a beautiful, soft dream.<br /><br />:-)<br />TraciStarTracihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02119043204191845721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-47201037215846295652010-09-25T00:01:52.284-04:002010-09-25T00:01:52.284-04:00so so so..... right. I love the image of the sing...so so so..... right. I love the image of the singular bubble - evanescent, fragile, but must be sent out into the world to fulfill its destiny. <br /><br />I am really glad I finished before reading yours. :) Its beautiful.kirstenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17833274360880170296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-75857811006606873732010-09-24T23:35:22.066-04:002010-09-24T23:35:22.066-04:00Simply descriptive! Beautiful work!Simply descriptive! Beautiful work!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15809598132676486785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-14869386662964895962010-09-24T22:00:05.587-04:002010-09-24T22:00:05.587-04:00Very very good.
We do a version of this with our...Very very good. <br /><br />We do a version of this with our students.cheatymoonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06328903955238115971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-16545021333591224112010-09-24T19:13:38.106-04:002010-09-24T19:13:38.106-04:00Oh, wow. You were truly able to make yours unique...Oh, wow. You were truly able to make yours unique in your own voice even though it was a temple. I thought it was VERY good!Kristy @Loveandblasphemyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02634987114195614214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-51510637407770681092010-09-24T19:10:38.989-04:002010-09-24T19:10:38.989-04:00I'm wordless! Wordless! Exquisitely beautiful ...I'm wordless! Wordless! Exquisitely beautiful and I know I've used that word on you before! WOW! <br /><br />Loved: I am my grandmother's education, cut short and tied like sausages. I am the square carpenter's pencils, these stern lead fence-posts.Adellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02514702407736792897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-50674398852321966192010-09-24T18:04:30.693-04:002010-09-24T18:04:30.693-04:00Just perfect. As usual. :)Just perfect. As usual. :)Maceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01405187347144334323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-45800935334667106692010-09-24T17:04:21.457-04:002010-09-24T17:04:21.457-04:00YOu really knocked it out of the ballpark. This wa...YOu really knocked it out of the ballpark. This was fabulous!The Drama Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11989820542966245871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-75628361672162174212010-09-24T13:58:37.367-04:002010-09-24T13:58:37.367-04:00You are really good! This is gorgeous and pains s...You are really good! This is gorgeous and pains such a lovely picture. Nice job.<br />Happy weekend, jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-60559024417805316052010-09-24T13:40:13.708-04:002010-09-24T13:40:13.708-04:00"cut short and tied like sausages"..your..."cut short and tied like sausages"..your descriptions are simply amazing.Sugar Bearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03888201944243203049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-91331347863317812182010-09-24T10:11:21.719-04:002010-09-24T10:11:21.719-04:00I don't even know where to begin to tell you h...I don't even know where to begin to tell you how strong this piece is. <br /><br />I could go line by line, telling you why I love each of your words, but instead, I'll tell you that this is my favorite part:<br /><br />"I am their perfect, singular bubble. Drifting, iridescent, and full, they watch me, whispering their hopes into the wind."<br /><br />Wait...and "...the false lawns in a thirsty land." <br /><br />And...okay, I'll stop. :)Nicholehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17074492084387694619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-79178679009315437922010-09-24T09:59:13.523-04:002010-09-24T09:59:13.523-04:00I can't add anything to what everyone else has...I can't add anything to what everyone else has said. Just lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-56417340015829332842010-09-24T09:57:03.279-04:002010-09-24T09:57:03.279-04:00I agree with every other of the commenters.. this ...I agree with every other of the commenters.. this is beyond imagination... beauty at its very bestRathihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10575572965786947205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-68079245377121478632010-09-24T09:39:15.756-04:002010-09-24T09:39:15.756-04:00What beautiful imagery. Love the prairie juxtapose...What beautiful imagery. Love the prairie juxtaposed against the desert...Love the references to your family. Well done!Tina L. Hookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12780807680745838371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-66207058816360652532010-09-24T01:06:52.356-04:002010-09-24T01:06:52.356-04:00I love this. You are fabulous!I love this. You are fabulous!erikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048369118376287016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-54576312526282876352010-09-24T00:02:29.843-04:002010-09-24T00:02:29.843-04:00As usual....you are astounding. Seriously...astou...As usual....you are astounding. Seriously...astounding.The Blogging Goddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14502157498300545488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-2060523828771929922010-09-23T23:42:08.974-04:002010-09-23T23:42:08.974-04:00This is gorgeous and poetic and I probably shouldn...This is gorgeous and poetic and I probably shouldn't have read it until I was completely done with mine but now I did so I have to go back once again..Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-58093181262379923762010-09-23T23:07:25.828-04:002010-09-23T23:07:25.828-04:00I am astounded and humbled by your "attempt&q...I am astounded and humbled by your "attempt". More like work of art. This was utter beauty. And once again, when I wander over here to your place, I am in love with these words you weave.Joann Mannixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11163491824085428085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-5773743977901003182010-09-23T22:14:17.343-04:002010-09-23T22:14:17.343-04:00Um, yeah - not disappointed. I really cannot get m...Um, yeah - not disappointed. I really cannot get mine as poemy (my word) as you guys are.<br /><br />This is lovely. I can feel your past and your witnesses.<br /><br />I also learned what an ocotillo is - entertainment and education. <br /><br />Very nice.Ashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16041241998702255016noreply@blogger.com