tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post5635451690121388569..comments2023-10-10T07:18:30.391-04:00Comments on Away We Go: What RemainsNancy Chttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04313721217543578257noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-17397980391084689612010-08-24T22:34:51.173-04:002010-08-24T22:34:51.173-04:00You blow my mind. I'm still playing catch up.....You blow my mind. I'm still playing catch up....fantastic. Riveting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13214914707096410664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-37397492604041862802010-08-24T15:52:24.061-04:002010-08-24T15:52:24.061-04:00This could be your best one yet. Can you hear me c...This could be your best one yet. Can you hear me clapping? I am, you know.Traciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10612857982151448455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-17933447943622900552010-08-23T07:53:49.340-04:002010-08-23T07:53:49.340-04:00love it.love it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-87979457941180104412010-08-23T06:37:42.938-04:002010-08-23T06:37:42.938-04:00Wow. Goosebumps.
You're an awesome writer.Wow. Goosebumps.<br /><br />You're an awesome writer.When did I become my Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09229236677862122055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-23244521425066072692010-08-22T22:55:59.871-04:002010-08-22T22:55:59.871-04:00Fantastic! Very moving.Fantastic! Very moving.Missy@Wonder, Friendhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06953028014035929759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-43132679374763602702010-08-21T20:31:22.960-04:002010-08-21T20:31:22.960-04:00That is fantastic!!!!
How the hell did you do it ...That is fantastic!!!! <br />How the hell did you do it without personal pronouns??? LOL I couldn't!Maceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01405187347144334323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-24118887443179535642010-08-21T20:11:52.195-04:002010-08-21T20:11:52.195-04:00This is a piece that touches people at the core - ...This is a piece that touches people at the core - it's raw. And it's excellent. I really like the Lady Macbeth reference.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-83158203722323888152010-08-21T15:49:42.625-04:002010-08-21T15:49:42.625-04:00Uhm, you are the shiite. Ditto to what Matty said...Uhm, you are the shiite. Ditto to what Matty said - I can see how difficult that was to leave out the pronouns, but you did it beautifully. This piece made me want to go back and read it again.Cobyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14704408483741211604noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-51794393672318199222010-08-21T09:12:13.408-04:002010-08-21T09:12:13.408-04:00Just reading it, I could tell how hard it was to l...Just reading it, I could tell how hard it was to leave out the pronouns. Nice job!Mattyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13979949404266325705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-78710098497517326322010-08-21T03:18:55.927-04:002010-08-21T03:18:55.927-04:00I;m with the commenter above. THis needs to be ent...I;m with the commenter above. THis needs to be entered in something. It is so solid and tightly written.<br /><br />JUST so wonderful. Not an unnecessary word in there.Alexandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00609629888008025050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-45027600105926079172010-08-21T01:34:58.868-04:002010-08-21T01:34:58.868-04:00Wow! That was fabulous. Really.Wow! That was fabulous. Really.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17218519474695662328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-6101865870087675752010-08-21T00:00:30.160-04:002010-08-21T00:00:30.160-04:00That was seriously good, Nancy! Great job.
jjThat was seriously good, Nancy! Great job.<br />jjJoanna Jenkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10836376588710862173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-11606386162588187482010-08-20T23:46:35.610-04:002010-08-20T23:46:35.610-04:00Wow. Really, really great.Wow. Really, really great.Jessica Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11331090466541120750noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-22089284736956569412010-08-20T19:11:33.846-04:002010-08-20T19:11:33.846-04:00Very impressive! Very touching!
Bravo!Very impressive! Very touching!<br /><br />Bravo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-32627246613741262662010-08-20T18:38:52.464-04:002010-08-20T18:38:52.464-04:00This is absolutely brilliant, superbly written. Fu...This is absolutely brilliant, superbly written. Full of emotion. Just brilliant.One Photohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05793386254564806126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-9488386628972495252010-08-20T17:50:54.553-04:002010-08-20T17:50:54.553-04:00Wow, that would be HARD. You did well though. Yo...Wow, that would be HARD. You did well though. You did well.Cheeseboyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02358419997798632644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-71030794071851331432010-08-20T17:32:42.759-04:002010-08-20T17:32:42.759-04:00FABULOUS!FABULOUS!Shellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06811697675090627618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-87020420446167944732010-08-20T16:57:43.903-04:002010-08-20T16:57:43.903-04:00You are FANTASTIC. That is all I have to say...You are FANTASTIC. That is all I have to say...The Ninjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11428180388263305127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-42203269091106653602010-08-20T15:37:37.167-04:002010-08-20T15:37:37.167-04:00Wow - great piece! Very visual!
I was worried ab...Wow - great piece! Very visual!<br /><br />I was worried about the lack of pronouns too when I started. Today I am speaking in ALL pronouns. It doesn't make much sense but I missed those guys.Mommy Wishdomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07840619627314731020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-37937871708941636162010-08-20T15:34:58.033-04:002010-08-20T15:34:58.033-04:00Just lovely and heartfelt. Really, really well don...Just lovely and heartfelt. Really, really well done.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-9619188673494005502010-08-20T15:22:15.804-04:002010-08-20T15:22:15.804-04:00Touching. And beautiful.
Thank you for visiting m...Touching. And beautiful.<br /><br />Thank you for visiting my blog.Tina L. Hookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12780807680745838371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-87397864446160596342010-08-20T15:06:45.572-04:002010-08-20T15:06:45.572-04:00You should totally enter this into any writing con...You should totally enter this into any writing contest you can find. It's great.Rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07930274958410589309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-75295168371234078422010-08-20T14:48:40.729-04:002010-08-20T14:48:40.729-04:00I had no doubt you would knock this out of the par...I had no doubt you would knock this out of the park. So touching and vibrant.<br /><br />Bet you didn't struggle all that much ;-)Ashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16041241998702255016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-75293119752733813982010-08-20T14:39:45.777-04:002010-08-20T14:39:45.777-04:00Now that is some tasty and heartfelt writing.Now that is some tasty and heartfelt writing.Ms. Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09776404747858099919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4704768195528999087.post-35448254231495818572010-08-20T14:29:47.957-04:002010-08-20T14:29:47.957-04:00Wow, incredible.Wow, incredible.Veronicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04633663187668003762noreply@blogger.com