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Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Red Writing Hood: All a Twitter


The Prompt: 
Let’s lighten it up around here. And when I say lighten, I mean REALLY lighten.
This week’s assignment will require the fewest number of words ever: we want you to write a story – your choice of topic – as a tweet.
That’s right. One hundred and forty characters. Not words. Characters.

 Here 'Tis:
They had been married thirty years. She arched her back. Gasped. Sensation erupted in endless waves. But only in Madge's arms. Never his. 


35 comments:

CDG said...

oh, you are wicked.

I love it!

michelle said...

oooh... that's good!

Madge???

xoxoxo

From Tracie said...

Oooh!

You said quite a lot in those few characters.

Good job!

Ash said...

You're such a tease. Nicely done.

I'll have what she's having.

angela said...

So much in so few words. You threw down the gauntlet on this one :)

Renee said...

Wow! Caught by surprise in just 140 characters. Good job.

Carrie said...

is it hot in here...or is it just me?

Saucy! And intriguing :)

Jenna said...

nicely done!!!

mamatrack.com said...

Very intriguing. And Madge? Seriously?

jenny said...

wow. never thought I'd say this about 140 characters, but I loved the ending! :)

Galit Breen said...

Nicely done girlfriend!!

Julie said...

Surprise twist - in a tweet! That's impressive! #trdc

Patty said...

Ohhhh...sneaky and decadent. I love it!!

Kid-FreeLiving said...

I never dreamed the chick from the old Palmolive commercials had such an interesting sex life!

dosweatthesmallstuff said...

RRRRrrrrrr...

hahahahaha...this is so wickedly delicious! A great twist at the end. Totally unexpected. Awesome!

Victoria KP said...

Spicy! Madge? Oh my!

Kir said...

love, love, love. The "sensation" was sexy and sultry. I do love a mid life Awakening ;)

Random Girl said...

oh the scandal, and the secrets. 140 quality characters on this one!

Erin said...

Ohhh intriguing! I love it! So nicely done!

Evonne said...

Passion with a huge twist. I love it!

Kristy said...

I LOVE THIS ONE!

Tomekha said...

Very nicely done :)I love it.

Katie @ Chicken Noodle Gravy said...

Wow! This one sizzled! I loved how much you conveyed with so few words. Really nicely done!

May said...

Well, well, well....you didn't waste a single character!

Nicole Rivera said...

You surprised me! Awesome job! I love it!!

Ratz said...

Surprises! Surprises! i like this Nancy.

MrsJenB said...

Ooooooh! Very well done! I know my eyebrows shot up for sure.

Nichole said...

Not a wasted character.
Not one.

sarah said...

Oh - OH- OHHHHH!
Fantastic! What a twist ;)
I want a whole story after reading that short snippet!

tsonodablog said...

Oh my goodness. You tease you. Awesome! Bold. And I'm sure I can speak for a bunch of us. "MORE please".

letmestartbysaying said...

Ha HA! Naughty! Which, obviously, means "Awesome" in my book.

Karen said...

Wow, so much spice in 140! :>

pauline said...

DAY-um! *applause* I know I want to read more.

The Girl Behind said...

Blimey, that's good.

And very intriguing!

Ms. Moon said...

Perfect.